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Monday, September 23, 2019

15 minute narrative

Last friday we had to write a narrative in 15 minutes with the following punctuation . , ! ? " " ( ) ...
This is the narrative that I wrote. Enjoy :)


They were sitting in class on the last day of school, waiting for the bell to ring. Vanessa sat there on her phone scrolling through Instagram, wishing she was like all the influencers she followed; pretty, blonde, perfect, skinny, tan, the list goes on. Then, she saw one of her friends posts… It was a picture of Vanessa’s boyfriend and Vanessa’s friend, the caption was ‘should’ve had life360’ (an app to track where people are). Vanessa’s boyfriend didn’t have instagram, so he didn’t know that she knew about him cheating on her. Vanessa went over to her friend and started yelling at her, “HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?!” “Do what?” Her friend responded with, “YOU KNOW WHAT I’M TALKING ABOUT!” Vanessa ran out of the classroom crying, heading towards her boyfriends class. She stormed in, walked over to him, and slapped him. To be continued...

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